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Integrated Writing - Advantages & Disadvantages
A structured template for discussing the advantages and disadvantages presented in the reading passage and lecture.
In this integrated writing task, you are required to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of an issue as presented in the reading passage and the lecture. This template offers a clear structure to help you organize your response by weighing the pros and cons of the issue.
Introduction (1 paragraph)
• Hook: Start with a general statement about the topic. • Background: Briefly mention that the reading and lecture present both advantages and disadvantages. • Thesis statement: Indicate that you will discuss these contrasting points.
Example:
The debate over [subject] continues to evoke mixed opinions. While the reading passage highlights the benefits of [issue], the lecture also points out several drawbacks. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages associated with [subject].
Body Paragraph 1 (1 paragraph)
• Topic sentence: Introduce the advantages presented in the reading. • Reading point: Summarize a key advantage from the reading. • Lecture point: Include any supporting or contrasting evidence from the lecture regarding the advantage. • Analysis: Explain how these points illustrate the benefits.
Example:
The reading emphasizes that [advantage], suggesting that it leads to [benefit]. In support, the lecture notes that [related detail], reinforcing the positive impact of [advantage].
Body Paragraph 2 (1 paragraph)
• Topic sentence: Introduce the disadvantages mentioned. • Reading point: Outline a significant disadvantage from the reading. • Lecture point: Present the lecture’s perspective on this drawback. • Analysis: Clarify how these points reveal the limitations.
Example:
Conversely, the reading points out that [disadvantage] can result in [negative effect]. The lecture further explains that [corresponding detail], indicating that the issue is more complex than it initially appears.
Body Paragraph 3 (optional)
• Topic sentence: Optionally, discuss an additional advantage or disadvantage. • Reading vs. Lecture: Provide further comparison with specific examples. • Analysis: Emphasize the overall balance between the benefits and drawbacks.
Example:
Additionally, while the reading briefly mentions that [additional advantage/disadvantage], the lecture counters with [additional detail]. This further underscores the nuanced nature of [subject].
Conclusion (1 paragraph)
• Restate thesis: Summarize the advantages and disadvantages. • Summary: Briefly recap the key points from both sources. • Closing: End with a concluding remark that reflects on the overall evaluation.
Example:
In conclusion, both the reading and the lecture provide valuable insights into the advantages and disadvantages of [subject]. While the benefits such as [advantage] are significant, the drawbacks including [disadvantage] cannot be ignored. Together, these points highlight the complex nature of the issue.
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Dr. Emma Chen
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Last updated: March 15, 2025